“Mr. Speaker, yesterday’s budget raises fundamental questions about the government’s spending priorities. The government cannot claim fiscal responsibility while taxing the fuel rural Canadians rely on and committing billions to Alto high-speed rail. Families in Hastings—Lennox and Addington—Tyendinaga face the prospect of paying for a vanity project that could also take their land without any demonstrated business case. This is not responsible governance. It is a staggering disconnect from reality. Will the government cancel Alto and put those billions toward the priorities of Canadian families?”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 38 wordswhen it comes to high-speed rail, in particular this high-speed rail, it is a generational and transformational opportunity for Ontario and Quebec, boosting the GDP by up to $32 billion, with 50,000 jobs, 12and reducing our carbon footprint.Positioning · 31 wordsThe big thing, quite frankly, is that we are listening to Canadians.Vague promiseWe are listening to Ontarians and Quebeckers with respect to high-speed rail.We have, we are and we will.PositioningVague promise