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Ryan Turnbull

110 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Dane Lloyd (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, if I mastered my own finances the same way the Prime Minister masters the budget, I would not qualify for a payday loan at Money Mart. The Prime Minister told Canadians his deficit was only a measly $62 billion but when he includes his so-called investments, it reaches $150 billion. This kind of accounting trickery would not get someone a bank loan from the Prime Minister, but he keeps printing money and driving up inflation. Meanwhile, Canada lost 50,000 jobs just last month. When will the Prime Minister finally get his costly credit card spending under control so that Canadians will not be mastered by his debt?”
Statement grade
C–
Average 58 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 57%Claims 35%Promise 7%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 56 wordswhy does it seem that Conservatives only seem to celebrate when they think Canada is failing? It is as if they are confirming what they really want every day in the House.Off point We are standing up and using the fiscal strength that Canada has to make the country stronger, to support Canadians with real affordability measures.PositioningVague promise Claims · 18 wordsWe have cut taxes on income, housing, fuel and new business investment.1 We have seen the economy growing, Promise · 8 wordsand we are continuing to invest in jobs.Vague promise Claims · 21 wordsIn my region alone, 50,000 new jobs have been created by our government.2 There are billions of dollars of new investment.3 Positioning · 7 wordsThat is how we build Canada strong.PositioningPartly on point

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