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Peter Fragiskatos

99 words · 9 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Chris Lewis (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, nearly one in five young people in Windsor-Essex who wants to work cannot find a job. That is thousands of youth being denied the opportunity to get ahead, buy a home and build a future for themselves. After 10 years of the Liberal government, youth unemployment in Windsor-Essex is higher than the national average of 13.7%. Young people are paying the price for a decade of failed Liberal budgets. Why does this Liberal budget have nothing for the youth in Windsor-Essex?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 84 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 48%Positioning 11%Reasoning 30%The ask 10%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 23 wordsthe general uncertainty that has been prompted by the tariffs levied against Canada in such an unjustified way has created uncertainty in business.1 Positioning · 11 wordsWe know that the Conservatives almost always fail to mention this, PositioningReasoning · 18 wordsbut it is a key point, Off pointand it is a key point relating to the youth unemployment rate. Claims · 25 wordsThe productivity mega deduction has been mentioned here at length today. It should be. It creates the most competitive tax jurisdiction in the industrialized world.2 Reasoning · 12 wordsThat means investment. That means jobs. That means jobs for young people. The ask · 10 wordsLet us work together to continue to make this happen.Off pointVague promise

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