Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Branden Leslie

229 words · 13 sentences · 20 clauses

Statement grade
B
76 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 6%Aside 7%Claims 41%Promise 3%Anecdote 38%Reasoning 2%Procedure 2%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 13 wordsI would like to thank my hon. colleague for bringing forward this bill.Thanks Aside · 17 wordsHearing her speech, I imagine our ridings share some similarities insofar as the rural nature of them.Aside Claims · 18 wordsI think this bill would make a difference, and that is why Conservatives supported it at second reading.1 Promise · 7 wordsI intend to also support it today. Anecdote · 36 wordsIn fact, I brought up this bill while standing in a community with residents who were asking me why they could not make a phone call right where we were standing in the middle of town.Anecdote Claims · 45 wordsI think this is a step. Again, I was reviewing the budget from yesterday, and I see references to things like increasing spectrum availability and having it at an auction.2 Now, that sort of promise is positive, although it has no associated timeline with it, Reasoning · 5 wordswhich is, of course, worrisome. Claims · 32 wordsGoing back to when we started developing this spectrum policy, it was the very earliest days of iPhones.3 Things have changed so immensely in technology and the way we live our lives. Procedure · 5 wordsLet me outline some differences.Procedure Anecdote · 51 wordsI might be driving home today here in Ottawa, and my phone call might drop. It will be annoying for a brief second, but I will hit redial, my call will be answered, and I will pick up where I left off in my conversation, versus when I am driving down—Anecdote

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