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Patricia Lattanzio

90 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Alana Hirtle (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, in communities across this country, intimate partner violence is not an abstract idea. Survivors have been clear that they need our justice system to act earlier and more effectively to keep them safe. I am proud to be part of this new government’s commitment to taking tangible action to better protect Canadians. Will the parliamentary secretary please tell this House how Bill C-16 would strengthen protections for victims of violence, and why it is so important that we move forward without delay?”
Statement grade
A
Average 90 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 8%Reasoning 40%Claims 43%The ask 9%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 7 wordsI thank my colleague for her leadership.Thanks Reasoning · 23 wordsViolence driven by control and fear leaves deep and lasting harm, and far too many women and children are living with those consequences. Claims · 39 wordsThat is why we introduced Bill C-16, one of the most significant updates to Canada’s criminal justice system in generations.1Partly on point It would criminalize coercive control before violence turns lethal and would strengthen protections against sexual exploitation, including AI deepfakes.2 Reasoning · 13 wordsEvery day we delay in passing this bill, we are delaying protecting victims. The ask · 8 wordsI urge all members to support Bill C-16.

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