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Caroline Desrochers

170 words · 10 sentences · 14 clauses

Replying to Kurt Holman (Conservative). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Mr. Speaker, the member mentioned to a Conservative colleague what we should cut to help Canadians. Repeatedly, with the Trudeau government, we heard about scandal upon scandal and about the waste of taxpayers’ dollars. I am concerned, even with the current Liberal government, of potentially more scandals with regard to wasting taxpayers’ dollars. Is the Liberal government going to come to terms and stop wasting taxpayers’ dollars on behalf of all Canadians?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 70 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 45%Claims 31%Promise 15%Procedure 9%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 29 wordsI understand that it is hard for them to come up with a plan that makes sense. That is exactly what we are proposing: Vague promisea plan that makes sense.PositioningOff point Claims · 29 wordsI repeat, we have announced $1.5 billion to help the industries most affected by the trade war.2 We are investing in our infrastructure to build the Canada of tomorrow.Vague promise Promise · 26 wordsWe are going to train 100,000 youths in specialized trades to put them at the centre of the major projects that we are going to build.3 Claims · 23 wordsWe are doing all this while reducing the deficit, which according to the economic statement is down from $78 million to $67 million.1 Procedure · 16 wordsI will say this in English, because I do not have the right words in French.4Procedure Positioning · 47 wordsI am so tired of hearing about the social programs as if they are handouts, and of hearing about people who need to rent apartments as if “Why are you guys building apartments? People want to own their home.” Through the Chair, please stop putting Canadians down.PositioningPartly on point

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