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Julie Dabrusin

52 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Mario Simard (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, the reality is that 60 Liberal members formed an environmental caucus. Now that the new pipeline has been announced and the member for Laurier—Sainte-Marie has resigned, they are nowhere to be found. One of the caucus co-chairs even said that the mandate of the environmental caucus is not to promote environmental issues. We could not make this stuff up. Just think: Their aim is not to promote environmental causes, but simply to bring members together for some good conversations. Wow. This reminds me of the old hot stove league. Is that why they are defending policies—”
Statement grade
D+
50 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Positioning 60%Promise 40%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 31 wordsI would love to introduce my colleague to the members of the Liberal environmental caucus who are fighting climate change, 2Vague promiseas are all 173 members on this side of the House.1Positioning Promise · 21 wordsOur government will continue to fight climate change.Vague promise We will continue to protect the environment.Vague promise Our government remains committed to that.Vague promise

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