“Mr. Speaker, we already knew that the cost of acquiring the F-35s had skyrocketed, going from $19 billion to $28 billion. However, we learned that, in addition to the 72 U.S. jets, the Liberals are thinking of buying another 72 fighter jets, the Gripen, for a potential fleet of 144 fighter jets. The questions are simple. First, is that true? Second, how much will it cost? Lastly, could this money be better invested to meet the needs of Canadians?”
Statement grade
B
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 76 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 63%Procedure 7%Promise 30%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 15 wordswe are acquiring a new fleet of fighter jets for the Royal Canadian Air Force.1Partly on pointProcedure · 4 wordsThe member knows that.ProcedureClaims · 23 wordsWe are reviewing all procurement approaches so that they align with the interests of Canadians and the needs of the Canadian Armed Forces.Promise · 18 wordsWe are committed to acquiring what the air force needs, Vague promisewhile guaranteeing economic benefits for Canadians, including Quebeckers.Partly on pointVague promise