Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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Procedure 7%Claims 25%Thanks 50%Anecdote 18%
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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 11 wordsI want to take members on a trip down memory lane.ProcedureClaims · 37 wordsIn 1926, seven visionary and determined women founded BPW Montréal, a business and professional women’s network.1For the past 100 years, BPW Montréal has played an important role in advancing gender equality and promoting women’s professional development.Thanks · 22 wordsTo the many CEOs and dedicated board members who have served the organization over the past century, congratulations on this remarkable milestone.ThanksAnecdote · 27 wordsWhile some are no longer with us and are watching over us today, I am certain they would be immensely proud of all that has been accomplished.AnecdoteThanks · 54 wordsTo the tireless, the passionate, the go-getters: Your contributions have left an indelible mark on the organization as we celebrate it today.My colleagues and I have great admiration for all that has been achieved, and we fully appreciate the strength and collective power of women.I wish BPW Montréal a very happy centenary.Thanks