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Eric St-Pierre

75 words · 6 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Dane Lloyd (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I note that the hon. member is a climate change champion and that he talked a lot about the clean energy investments his government is making. I want to ask about the productivity mega tax deduction. It is estimated that this tax deduction will provide a $2-billion annual tax break to Canada’s oil and gas sector. We are certainly excited about that in Alberta. I wonder if the member could tell us how excited he is that his government is providing a $2-billion tax break to Canada’s oil and gas sector.”
Statement grade
D–
44 / 100, held down by Signal
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Aside 76%Positioning 9%Claims 15%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Aside · 10 wordsI think you are excited about the budget from yesterday.Aside Positioning · 7 wordsI am very enthused about yesterday’s budget.Positioning Claims · 11 wordsAs I outlined, we had a lot of measures in there.Partly on point Aside · 47 wordsI can sense your excitement. I know you are going to applaud the excitement for yesterday’s budget. You are looking forward to going back to your riding, talking about the electricity funding and probably even the EV chargers that might be installed in some of your communities—AsidePartly on point

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