Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Jake Sawatzky

159 words · 12 sentences · 14 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 88 / 100
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Procedure 16%Claims 38%Anecdote 13%Reasoning 27%The ask 5%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 15 wordsas we enter another November, I rise to recognize the Movember movement for men’s health.Procedure Claims · 21 wordsMovember brings light to some of the darkest topics, such as suicide. Unfortunately, three out of every four suicides are men.1 Anecdote · 21 wordsAs someone who has nearly lost several people I care about deeply to suicide attempts, this cause hits close to home.Anecdote Claims · 22 wordsOur government is advancing Canada’s first federal men and boys’ health and well-being strategy to better support men’s physical and mental health.2 Procedure · 11 wordsToday, I would like to speak to the men out there.Procedure Reasoning · 34 wordsThey may not realize it all the time, but there are always people they can turn to. The world needs them, and they are enough. They do not have to face their challenges alone. Claims · 18 wordsIn a moment of distress, remember that they can dial 988 and find someone to help them through.3 The ask · 8 wordsThis Movember, let us make time for conversations. Reasoning · 9 wordsEven when uncomfortable, they can make all the difference.

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