Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Pauline Rochefort

129 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

Statement grade
B
76 / 100, held down by Signal
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Claims 33%Thanks 45%Promise 17%Procedure 5%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 25 wordsI was very pleased to be able to represent the people of my riding, Nipissing—Timiskaming, during the tabling of our budget, “Masters of our Destiny”.1 Thanks · 20 wordsI would really like to thank all of the citizens and organizations in Nipissing—Timiskaming who participated in the budget process.Thanks Claims · 8 wordsThey submitted briefs and participated in round tables. Thanks · 18 wordsI want to say a very special thank you to the North Bay and District Chamber of Commerce, ThanksClaims · 10 wordsbecause it organized a special round table for small business. Promise · 22 wordsI really look forward to coming back to my riding and speaking about the productivity mega deduction that applies to small businesses.2 Thanks · 20 wordsIn closing, I want to thank the people of Nipissing—Timiskaming. On behalf of the government of Canada, I thank them.Thanks Procedure · 6 wordsNow, we move on to action.ProcedureVague promise

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